July 12, 2008

a Poem



Hope

They say follow your heart

Do as you feel deep inside

Step by step we cross our paths

Reaching for what’s vague behind

Yearning to open the folds

That our future further holds

Hating the smoke that keeps our destiny blurred

Wanting to throw our sights beyond such a puzzling fiend

Full of fear to leap one more time

And fall into the darkest hole

Where shall you and I go from here?

Is the light we’ve been promised waiting ahead?

With arms wide open, does it really exist?

Life is sweat, pain, and fear

Life is strength, love, and trust

Life is faith in the strongest of all

Life is hope, smiles are beyond this wall



P.S. 3a6aaaaaaaaaaaalt! mwa7a7a7a7a7a7a7a7a7a :-o

14 comments:

  1. is it your first? if yes good start

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  2. aww did you write this yourself
    it's great ! so spiritual and inspiring , and it rhymes in a lovely way , i loved reading it out loud < 3

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  3. wow :)


    love it..

    keep writing

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  4. Oranjina Fadidra..
    No actually it not.. but thanx.

    Gemini..
    Yeah, i did. i'm really glad you liked :-o

    Swarwar..
    mwa7a7a! i most definitely will :-0

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  5. Beautiful :*

    Mabroook for "3a6eling".

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  6. Oreo..
    Thanx.. :$

    and THANK YOU!!! :-o

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  7. MSHALLAH ITS REALLY NICE (Y)

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  8. Feminist..
    Thanx ;D
    me so wooooow! :-o

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  9. Lovely! Absolutely lovely!

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  10. i'm really glad you loved it! ;D

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